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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher Write at least 150 words.

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher a9x7
Dear Mr/Madam I am writing this letter in reference to an advertisement I saw in the Hamshahri newspaper on February 23, for evening teachers at your college. I noticed, that there are several courses which you need teachers for, but psychopathology, as the most important course in psychology, is my choice. Through this term, I can teach the student, essential mental disorders, how to diagnose signs and symptoms, and also they can learn different treatment methods effectively. I have a master's of clinical psychology and also I have a special qualification in this major. I held many courses for various colleges in Shiraz, Tabriz, Esfahan. according to my experiences, I have a good relationship with the new generation and I know-how should be easily taught this controversial material. so that they can use this lesson in their own life and future job opportunities. I have to mention that I am single and working part-time in Razi hospital 3 days a week as a psychologist. therefore evening classes are a big chance for me to do something beneficial in my free time. my certificates are attached. I look forward to hearing from you soon yours faithfully Raya Sadat
Dear Mr/Madam

I am writing this letter in reference to an advertisement I
saw
in the
Hamshahri
newspaper on February 23, for evening teachers at your college.

I noticed, that there are several courses which you need teachers for,
but
psychopathology, as the most
important
course in psychology, is my choice. Through this term, I can teach the student, essential mental disorders, how to diagnose signs and symptoms, and
also
they can learn
different
treatment methods
effectively
.

I have a master's of clinical psychology and
also
I have a special qualification in this major. I held
many
courses for various colleges in Shiraz, Tabriz,
Esfahan
.
according
to my experiences, I have a
good
relationship with the new generation and
I know-how
should be
easily
taught this controversial material.

so
that they can
use
this lesson in their
own
life and future job opportunities. I
have to
mention that I am single and working part-time in
Razi
hospital 3 days a week as a psychologist.
therefore
evening classes are a
big
chance for me to do something beneficial in my free time.

my
certificates
are attached
.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon


yours
faithfully


Raya
Sadat
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: • say which advertisement you are answering • describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about • explain why you would be a suitable teacher

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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