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You have invited to your friend’s wedding, which will take place in another country next month. Write a letter to the couple and say that you cannot attend. Explain why you are unable to come. Invite them to visit you after the wedding. Describe some activities you can do together when they visit.

You have invited to your friend’s wedding, which will take place in another country next month. Write a letter to the couple and say that you cannot attend. Explain why you are unable to come. Invite them to visit you after the wedding. Describe some activities you can do together when they visit. 0AamB
Dear Ashish, I have received your invitation card of your marriage, and I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I cannot come to enjoy the most beautiful day of your life. First of all, I am really sorry about not attending your wedding celebration. As you know, I am preparing for the IELTS exam, which will be held on the same day, and the exam is really important for my bright future. However, when you will be free from all the functions, you could come with your wife at my home for some days. Ahmadabad city is full of variety of foods and exquisite places. We could visit well-known places such as Kankaria lake, Zoo, Sabarmati riverfront, S. G. Highway and many more. There are different malls with game zone where we could have fun together, and we can watch a movie in Drive-in cinema which has open garden view. I hope you will understand my situation. Give me a reply with your exact date and time, so I can pick you up at the airport. Yours lovingly, Jay Panchal
Dear Ashish,

I have received your invitation card of your marriage, and I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to enjoy the most
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
day of your life.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, I am
really
sorry about not attending your wedding celebration. As you know, I am preparing for the IELTS exam, which will
be held
on the same day, and the exam is
really
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for my bright future.

However
, when you will be free from all the functions, you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
with your wife at my home for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
days. Ahmadabad city is full of variety of foods and exquisite places. We could visit well-known places such as
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Kankaria
lake, Zoo,
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Sabarmati
riverfront, S. G. Highway and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
malls with game zone where we could have fun together, and we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
a movie in Drive-in cinema which has open garden view.

I hope you will understand my situation. Give me a reply with your exact date and time,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can pick you up at the airport.

Yours
lovingly
,

Jay
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Panchal
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IELTS letter You have invited to your friend’s wedding, which will take place in another country next month. Write a letter to the couple and say that you cannot attend. Explain why you are unable to come. Invite them to visit you after the wedding. Describe some activities you can do together when they visit.

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7 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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