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Write a letter to your neighbour requesting him to lend you his laptop. In you letter: - Describe why you need a laptop. - How long you will be requiring the laptop. - Ensure him about the safety of his device and its content.

Write a letter to your neighbour requesting him to lend you his laptop. In you letter: - Describe why you need a laptop. - How long you will be requiring the laptop. - Ensure him about the safety of his device and its content. XG7or
Dear Mr. Patel, How are you? My name is Ishan Saverdekar, living at four blocks away from your house. I am writing this letter to ask you a great favour for lending me your laptop computer to use it for couple of hours. As you are aware of the current lockdown situation in our area due to pandemic issue of COVID 19, I am not able to reach to the office for completing the website uploading task which is at the highest priority project assigned to me at work. Moreover, my personal computer's charger is missing at the moment. The task is so important for me that if I could not complete this task today, then the company may lose his one of the big clients and may be me, my job. The wesite uploading work will take only 4 to 5 hours maximum. Once it is finished, I will return your computer to you in the same condition as it was before. In addition, for the protection of your device and stored material in it, I will make sure that no one else will touch your machine. I hope you will understand my circumstances and will help me with this great support. I am waiting for your quick positive reply. Yours sincerely,
Dear Mr. Patel,

How are you? My name is
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Ishan
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Saverdekar
, living at four blocks away from your
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house
. I am writing this letter to ask you a great
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favour
for lending me your laptop computer to
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use
it for
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couple of
hours.

As you are aware of the
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current
lockdown situation in our area due to pandemic issue of
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID 19
, I am not able to reach to the office for completing the website uploading task which is at the highest priority project assigned to me at work.
Moreover
, my personal computer's charger is missing at the moment. The task is
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so
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important
for me that if I could not complete this task
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today
, then the
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company
may lose his one of the
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big
clients and
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may be
me, my job.

The
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wesite
uploading work will take
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only
4 to 5 hours maximum. Once it
is finished
, I will return your computer to you in the same condition as it was
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before
.
In addition
, for the protection of your device and stored material in it, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that no one else will touch your machine.

I hope you will understand my circumstances and will
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help
me with this great support. I am waiting for your quick
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positive
reply.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your neighbour requesting him to lend you his laptop. In you letter: - Describe why you need a laptop. - How long you will be requiring the laptop. - Ensure him about the safety of his device and its content.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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