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Your friend has had his/her first book published a few days ago. He/she has recently sent you a copy of that book.

Your friend has had his/her first book published a few days ago. He/she has recently sent you a copy of that book. PVkng
Dear Albert, I can’t express how excited I am to learn that you have your first book published. That’s a great feat and I congratulate you on this brilliant achievement. I have got a copy of the book you have sent me and I am so exalted to be one of the lucky persons to receive the first edition of your book. I would like to take the chance to thank you for this. Just after getting the book, I started reading it and I have finished it within the next 24 hours. I must say that the book is amazingly written and it a fast-paced fiction that I have liked so much. I never knew you have such a great story-telling capability. Right from the cover illustration and the title, it took me deep into an enigmatic plot where each character had a profound role in mesmerizing its readers. The ending could not have been better. I am sure you will become a famous fiction writer someday. Many congratulations once again and I wish you every success as a writer. Take care. Warm wishes, William Roth
Dear Albert,

I can’t express how excited I am to learn that you have your
first
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book
published. That’s a great feat and I congratulate you on this brilliant achievement.

I have
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got
a copy of the
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book
you have
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sent
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me and
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so
exalted to be one of the lucky persons to receive the
first
edition of your
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book
. I would like to take the chance to thank you for this.

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Just
after getting the
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book
, I
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started
reading it and I have finished it within the
next
24 hours. I
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must
say that the
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book
is
amazingly
written and
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it
a
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fast
-paced fiction that I have liked
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so
much. I never knew you have such a great story-telling capability. Right from the cover illustration and the title, it took me deep into an enigmatic plot where each character had a profound role in mesmerizing its readers. The ending could not have been better. I am sure you will become a
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famous
fiction writer someday.

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Many
congratulations once again and I wish you every success as a writer. Take care.

Warm wishes,

William Roth

IELTS letter Your friend has had his/her first book published a few days ago. He/she has recently sent you a copy of that book.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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