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Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options. jKeL
Dear Smith, Hope you and your family are doing well! I am writing in regard to inform you that I will be arriving in London on 25th May Sunday. I am appearing with my colleagues as it is an excursion of 10 days from our organization. Although, we planned every day to visit the London Museum, Art Gallery, Bridge and Statue of Liberty. Still, we have a few days to plan for wandering. As you are a resident of London, I wonder to get suggestions for various places that are famous for cuisines, dancing or party, historical, religious, and traditional. Therefore, we could plan the rest of the holidays according to your advice and would have a leisure day to meet you before flying back. I am looking forward to your list of suggestions in the near future. Best regards,
Dear Smith,

Hope you and your family are doing well!

I am writing in regard to inform you that I will be arriving in London on 25th May Sunday. I
The verb 'appearing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
am appearing
with my colleagues as it is an excursion of 10 days from our organization.

Although, we planned every day to visit the London Museum, Art Gallery, Bridge and Statue of Liberty.
Still
, we have a few days to plan for wandering. As you are a resident of London, I wonder to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
suggestions for various places that are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
for cuisines, dancing or party, historical, religious, and traditional.

Therefore
, we could plan the rest of the holidays according to your advice and would have a leisure day to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
flying back.

I am looking forward to your list of suggestions in the near future.

Best regards,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend in another country where you like to visit for the holidays. In your letter, you should: explain your travel plans describe the interesting places you plan to visit ask for suggestions for sightseeing options.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
140 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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