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you work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job

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Dear sir, My name is Saarthi Pandey a former employee at your company at a designation of machine operator. I would like to complain regarding the new drill bit which we purchased from xyz company. The tool doesn’t meet satisfactorily to our requirements and need to be grinded often. With this problem there are number of consequences associated for example the productivity of machine is degrading, idle time is increasing, fatigue is caused to be alert on both machineries. All in all, the number of rejections for the product is affecting the quality and reputation of company. I tried to randomly select the lot of drill bits provided by vendor but still results are same. So, it’s my humble request if you can change the supplier or perform the drilling operation on the semi-automatic controlled machine. I reported to our floor manager but it seems like he is busy as bees, and informed me to write a letter regarding the issue I am facing. I hope you will find solution as soon as possible Thanking you Yours sincerely Saarthi Pandey
Dear sir,

My name is
Saarthi
Pandey
a former employee at your
company
at a designation of machine operator. I would like to complain regarding the new drill bit which we
purchased
from
xyz
company
. The tool doesn’t
meet
satisfactorily
to our requirements and need to be
grinded
often
. With this problem there are number of consequences associated
for example
the productivity of machine is degrading, idle time is increasing, fatigue
is caused
to be alert on both
machineries
. All in all, the number of rejections for the product is affecting the quality and reputation of
company
. I tried to
randomly
select the lot of drill bits provided by vendor
but
still
results are same.
So
, it’s my humble request if you can
change
the supplier or perform the drilling operation on the semi-automatic controlled machine.

I reported to our floor manager
but
it seems like he is busy as bees, and informed me to write a letter regarding the issue I am facing. I hope you will find solution as
soon
as
possible


Thanking you

Yours
sincerely


Saarthi
Pandey
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IELTS letter you work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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