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You missed an appointmentfor an immigration interview recently because of circumstance out of your control.

You missed an appointmentfor an immigration interview recently because of circumstance out of your control. BJxRp
Dear Mr Wood, I am writing to you in order toexplain why my absence for an immigration interview I was scheduled to atend last Friday and request a new appointment. In fact, I was on my way when I received a call from my children's school. According to the call, my daughter was suffering an asthma attact. As my wife was disavailable, it was necessary for me to accompany my daughter to the hospital. I attempted to contact your office to cancel the appointment. However my mobile phone ran out of batteries. When I got to the hospital I was very busy taking care of my daughter and talking to the doctors. So I forgot. II sincerely appologise for the inconvinience. I was wondering if it was possible to arrange a new appointment for the next two week. I am available till 11p. m. from Monday to Thursday and after 1p. m on Friday. I can be contacted at the e-mail address ar the phone number provided. Thank you so much fo your assistance in this situation. Your sincerely, Susan
Dear Mr Wood,

I am writing to you in order
toexplain
why my absence for an immigration interview I
was scheduled
to
atend
last Friday and request a new appointment.

In fact, I was on my way when I received a call from my children's school. According to the call, my daughter was suffering an asthma
attact
. As my wife was
disavailable
, it was necessary for me to accompany my daughter to the hospital. I attempted to contact your office to cancel the appointment.
However
my mobile phone ran out of batteries. When I
got
to the hospital I was
very
busy taking care of my daughter and talking to the doctors.
So
I forgot.

II
sincerely
appologise
for the
inconvinience
. I was wondering if it was possible to arrange a new appointment for the
next
two week. I am available till 11p. m. from Monday to Thursday and after 1p.
m
on Friday. I can
be contacted
at the e-mail address
ar
the phone number provided.

Thank you
so
much
fo
your assistance in this situation.
Your
sincerely
,
Susan
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IELTS letter You missed an appointmentfor an immigration interview recently because of circumstance out of your control.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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