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You missed an appointment for an immigration interview recently because of circumstances out of your control. Write an apology letter to the immigration office.

You missed an appointment for an immigration interview recently because of circumstances out of your control. Write an apology letter to the immigration office. mW26q

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Mrs Shukurdjonova, a candidate for manager in your company. Please accept my sincere apologies for missing appointment on June 2th. As I mentioned my application I am currently sacked. I really need a job. However, a problem has risen. While coming meeting, a friend of mine phoned me and she said that she was feeling sick herself. I immediately rush in her house without thinking nothing. Owing to the fact that she lives alone. I brought her into hospital and she was admitted there. After that I stared at that time, unfortunately it was too late. I realize that this will be inconvenient to you, but very much hope that, given circumstances, you would be prepared to allow me to meet with you once again. I would like to emphasize that I remain extremely keen to work with you. I look forward to hearing a reply as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Mrs Shukurdjonova.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Mrs Possible spelling mistake found.
Shukurdjonova
, a candidate for manager in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept my sincere apologies for missing appointment on June Please check the suffix, if this is an ordinal number.1st2nd3rd
2th
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I mentioned my application I am currently
 sacked. I really
 need a job. However
, a problem has risen.

While coming meeting, a friend of mine phoned Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).me, and
me and
 she said that she was feeling sick herself. I immediately rush in her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 without thinking nothing. Owing to the fact that she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 alone. I brought her into hospital and she was admitted
 there. After that I stared at that time, unfortunately it was too late.

I realize that this will be inconvenient to you, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much hope that, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 circumstances, you would be prepared
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 with you once again.

I would like to emphasize that I remain extremely
 keen to work with you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing a reply as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours faithfully
,

Mrs Possible spelling mistake found.
Shukurdjonova
. 