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Read the following form. Then write a letter of complaint from the customer to the manager of Ribbons.

Read the following form. Then write a letter of complaint from the customer to the manager of Ribbons. QlYPb
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my disgust at the appalling treatment I bought in your shop on June 8th 2002. Firstly, I bought Pollover and your manager specially recommended it as guaranteed against shrinking and fading. However, I has only been washed once yet, was shocked to see that shrunk to 1/2 size. Then, When I purchased was deep red. Now it was faded pink colour. In spite of fact that I had repeater my order to check that the manager had heard me correctly. Futhermore, your shop sell it more expensive then the other shops. It is sold with price 7$ but I purchased with price 10$ in your shop. In this worst case scenario, I expect to receive a refund from your company for all the charges I paid or any measures you could take to compensate for me. I look forward to a swift solution to this matter
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my disgust at the appalling treatment I
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bought
in your shop on June 8th 2002.

Firstly
, I
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bought
Possible spelling mistake found.
Pollover
and your manager
specially
recommended it as guaranteed against shrinking and fading.
However
, I
The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "have", "haven"
has
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only
been washed
once
yet
,
was shocked
to
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see
that shrunk to 1/2 size.

Then, When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
was deep red.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
it
was faded
pink
Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.
colour
.
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In spite of
fact that I had repeater my order to
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check
that the manager had heard me
correctly
.

Possible spelling mistake found.
Futhermore
, your shop sell it more expensive
Did you mean "than"?
then
the other shops. It
is sold
with price
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$7".
7$
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but
I
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purchased
with price
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$10".
10$
in your shop.

In this worst case scenario, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
to receive a refund from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
for all the charges I paid or any measures you could take to compensate for me. I look forward to a swift solution to this
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IELTS letter Read the following form. Then write a letter of complaint from the customer to the manager of Ribbons.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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