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Read the following form. Then write a letter of complaint from the customer to the manager of Ribbons.

Read the following form. Then write a letter of complaint from the customer to the manager of Ribbons. QlYPb

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my disgust at the appalling treatment I bought in your shop on June 8th 2002. Firstly, I bought Pollover and your manager specially recommended it as guaranteed against shrinking and fading. However, I has only been washed once yet, was shocked to see that shrunk to 1/2 size. Then, When I purchased was deep red. Now it was faded pink colour. In spite of fact that I had repeater my order to check that the manager had heard me correctly. Futhermore, your shop sell it more expensive then the other shops. It is sold with price 7$ but I purchased with price 10$ in your shop. In this worst case scenario, I expect to receive a refund from your company for all the charges I paid or any measures you could take to compensate for me. I look forward to a swift solution to this matter

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my disgust at the appalling treatment I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 in your shop on June 8th 2002.

Firstly
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
Possible spelling mistake found.RolloverPulloverPol loverPoll over
Pollover
 and your manager specially
 recommended it as guaranteed against shrinking and fading. However
, I The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "have", "haven"havehaven
has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
been washed
 once yet
, was shocked
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that shrunk to 1/2 size.

Then, When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 was deep red. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 it was faded
 pink Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 fact that I had repeater my order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 that the manager had heard me correctly
.

Possible spelling mistake found.Furthermore
Futhermore
, your shop sell it more expensive Did you mean "than"?than
then
 the other shops. It is sold
 with price The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$7".$7
7$
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 with price The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$10".$10
10$
 in your shop.

In this worst case scenario, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to receive a refund from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 for all the charges I paid or any measures you could take to compensate for me. I look forward to a swift solution to this Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphmatter.matter!matter?matter:matter,matter;
matter