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friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had asimilar problem in past #tell your friend you understand the problem # explain what happened to you in the past #suggest possible soultion to problem

friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had asimilar problem in past #tell your friend you understand the problem # explain what happened to you in the past #suggest possible soultion to problem VRlD

Dear John, It was great to get your postcard and I was thrilled to hear you are at same boat where I was before and you was asking for suggestions. I know John this phase is very difficult for you because your are living alone. I can understand your that how do you feel this time. As you know when I started this job, I faced huge discrimination by other employee because this working place was totally new for me that time and I need lot of practice to adjustment. However, behaviour of old workers remains same for me and I felt very depressed that time. I thankful to my husband who helped me to cope up with situation and suggested me to talk with manager of business. So, I discuss my issue with him, and he warned to all other employees. In this condition you need to speak with manager of company and discribe your problem in detail and if he refused to take any action than file a complaint against them as you know no-one have right to discrmination then they will face hard time. John, I hope this letter will be useful for you. I will wait for your response. With love, Sandra

Dear John,

It was great to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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postcard and
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 to hear you are at same boat where I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 and you Use second person verb with 'you': "are" or "were".arewere
was
 asking for suggestions. I know John this phase is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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because
 your are living alone. I can understand your that how do you feel this time.

As you know when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 this job, I faced huge discrimination by other employee This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this working place was totally
 new for me that time and I need It seems that an article is missing.a lot of
lot of
 practice to adjustment. However
, Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
 of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 workers remains same for me and I felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 depressed that time. Did you mean "I am"?I am
I
 thankful to my husband who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me to cope up with situation and suggested me to talk with manager of business. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I discuss my issue with him, and he warned to all other employees.

In this condition you need to speak with manager of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and Possible spelling mistake found.describe
discribe
 your problem in detail and if he refused to take any action than file a complaint against them as you know no-one have right to Possible spelling mistake found.discrimination
discrmination
 then they will face This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 time.

John, I hope this letter will be useful for you. I will wait for your response.

With This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
,

Sandra