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Write a letter to a manager of furniture company regarding the purchase you made and the problems you had when delivery arrived.

Write a letter to a manager of furniture company regarding the purchase you made and the problems you had when delivery arrived. 9LrGx
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the defective furniture that was delivered to my home by your company. I had bought two items, the six-piece dining table and a study table from your Ikea store located in the Toronto region. My order number is 178432 and I had ordered it on March 25. I had received the delivery yesterday in multiple pieces that need to be assembled. But unfortunately, when I started opening the boxes one by one, I found that one of the drawers of the study table was defective. It was badly scratched and seems like a used one. Moreover, there is also a hole at the corner of the table. I am disappointed with this issue and cannot accept the study table in this state. Hence, I want a replacement for this item before this weekend if possible. For your reference, I have attached a copy of my purchase bill. Hoping for prompt action regarding this matter. Yours faithfully, Jiten
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about the defective furniture that
was delivered
to my home by your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

I had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
two items, the six-piece dining
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
table
and a study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
table
from your
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Ikea
store located in the Toronto region. My order number is 178432 and I had ordered it on March 25. I had received the delivery yesterday in multiple pieces that need to
be assembled
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
unfortunately, when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
opening the boxes one by one, I found that one of the drawers of the study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
table
was defective. It was
badly
scratched and seems like a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
one.
Moreover
, there is
also
a hole at the corner of the table.

I
am disappointed
with this issue and cannot accept the study
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
table
in this state.
Hence
, I want a replacement for this item
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
this weekend if possible. For your reference, I have attached a copy of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
bill.

Hoping for prompt action regarding this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Jiten
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a manager of furniture company regarding the purchase you made and the problems you had when delivery arrived.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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