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You live in HCM City. You moved to Manchester to study English three months ago. You have just received an email from a friend of mine, Sara from London. Write a reply to Sara.

You live in HCM City. You moved to Manchester to study English three months ago. You have just received an email from a friend of mine, Sara from London. Write a reply to Sara. dDE86

Dear Sara, I am very happy when I got your email. I really miss you. Manchester is a beautiful city. The weather is so good with the sunshine and the windy. It is not too hot like HCM City. Though I used to be heard that it is very cold in the winter. I do not know how am I going to live in that weather. I think I will stay at home everytime, but it is not come true. I know. In the present, I do not have a part-time job in the fast-food restaurant. I think I need more times to adapt to new living environment and focus on English. However, I will apply to a difficult part-time jobs in a café because I prefer being enjoy the coffee asmotphere. A soft music song with a hot coffee is perfect for a nice day. Look the satisfied face’s everybody when enjoy the drinking made by myself is one of my hobbys. Now, I has staying with a Vietnamese-British family. The husband is British and the wife is Vietnamese, so they understand my unfamiliar with a different environment and they let me stay. I really grateful for them. Thanks to them, I meet many their friends and I felt like I am their daughter. I really happy. In the evening, I often enjoy the dinner with host family and co-tenants and talk together. The hostess talk about the first time she moved here, the first time she met her husband and more and more stories. My co-tenants are friendly and helpful. Some people is also my English classmate, so we practice English togerther. Now, my english is relatively good. Athought everything is good, I really miss you. I want to finish the course early to go to you. Remember to write to me. Waiting for your news. Love,

Dear Sara,

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 miss you. I want to finish the course early to go to you. Remember to write to me. Waiting for your news.

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