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You live in an English-speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. - Explain why you want to do voluntary work. - State what your skills and experience are.

You live in an English-speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. - Explain why you want to do voluntary work. - State what your skills and experience are. KOxk
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to organize a tour to Nigeria where I would like to get involve to the British Cancer Society's voluntary work in upcoming summer holidays. I would be greatful if you arrange the trip between Monday in the first week of June to the end of the month. I'm pursuing university course in whch it's a compulsary to participate into the voluntary work as a part of the assignment. Therefore I decided to go to Nigeria where they are having a cancer awarness camp. I posses to communicate well. Moreover, I'm great in teaching will help me to make people aware on how cancer spreads. Thanking you in the anticipation. Yours faithfully, Nehalkumar Patel
Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to organize a tour to Nigeria where I would like to
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get
involve to the British Cancer Society's voluntary work in upcoming summer holidays.

I would be
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greatful
if you arrange the trip between Monday in the
first
week of June to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the month.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm pursuing university course in
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whch
it's a
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compulsary
to participate into the voluntary work as a part of the assignment.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
I decided to go to Nigeria where they are having a cancer
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awarness
camp.

Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'I'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
I posses
to communicate well.
Moreover
, I'm great in teaching will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
aware on how cancer spreads.

Thanking you in the anticipation.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Nehalkumar
Patel

IELTS letter You live in an English-speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: - Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. - Explain why you want to do voluntary work. - State what your skills and experience are.

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  American English
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118 words
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