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In order to deter people from beginning smoking, governments should ban smoking in all public areas including outdoor areas. Discuss.

In order to deter people from beginning smoking, governments should ban smoking in all public areas including outdoor areas. Discuss. XEBJw

Dear Sir/Madame, I am writing this letter to request the officials regarding 'Prohibit Smoking in all public places including outdoor areas'. I am a working employee who will use public transport to and fro via Train. At Train station I am seeing lot of high school students started learning smoking and some groups are even taking ownership to teach them the ways how to kick start the smoking habit. Since it is public transport different age groups are utilizing. Smoking in Public areas is like a slow- poison since the effect of intaking contaminated air will not shown immediately, but everyone will face consequences. Worst part among all is nearly 5% of the customers who are utilizing the service are Expected Women. So it is not only impacting Mother but our Future generation too. Could you kindly take some action on this issue as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Jaya

Dear Sir/Madame,

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Smoking
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public
 places including outdoor areas'.

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public
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lot of
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started
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smoking
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some
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start
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smoking
 habit.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
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different
 age groups are utilizing. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfrenziedfanaticaldeliriouszealousenthusiasticcrazed
Smoking
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Public
 areas is like a slow- poison since the effect of Possible spelling mistake found.in taking
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but
 everyone will face consequences. A determiner is probably missing here: "the Worst".The Worst
Worst
 part among all is nearly
 5% of the customers who are utilizing the service are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
Expected
 Women. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 impacting Mother This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 our Future generation too.

Could you kindly take This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 action on this issue as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours Faithfully
,

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