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Write an e-mail to the club secretary. Explain your feelings and make suggestion

Write an e-mail to the club secretary. Explain your feelings and make suggestion 1nJGG
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this e-mail to express my deepest disappointment about the cancellation of the annual fundraiser dinner through lack of maintenance. Without a doubt we had really prepared all our best, unfortunately our projects would have been/ were absentminded. Could you imagine how do I feel troubled learning about that. In contrast we became aware of the fact that the annulment came up with a direct reason and it would be grateful if we are all members of the club come together and put up the money for our future programm/project as much as we can I look forward to hearing your response as soon as possible (yoki at your earliest convinience) Yours faithfull Mrs. Ann
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this e-mail to express my deepest disappointment about the cancellation of the annual fundraiser dinner through lack of maintenance.

Without a doubt we had
really
prepared all our best, unfortunately our projects would have been/
were absentminded
. Could you imagine how do I feel troubled learning about that.

In
The comma is probably missing here: "contrast, we".
contrast we
became aware of the fact that the annulment came up with a direct reason and it would be grateful if we are all members of the club
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
together and put up the money for our future
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programm
/project as much as we can

I look forward to hearing your response as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible (
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yoki
at your earliest
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convinience
)

Yours
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faithfull


Mrs. Ann
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IELTS letter Write an e-mail to the club secretary. Explain your feelings and make suggestion

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  American English
4 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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