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Write an e-mail to the club secretary. Explain your feelings and make suggestion

Write an e-mail to the club secretary. Explain your feelings and make suggestion 1nJGG

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this e-mail to express my deepest disappointment about the cancellation of the annual fundraiser dinner through lack of maintenance. Without a doubt we had really prepared all our best, unfortunately our projects would have been/ were absentminded. Could you imagine how do I feel troubled learning about that. In contrast we became aware of the fact that the annulment came up with a direct reason and it would be grateful if we are all members of the club come together and put up the money for our future programm/project as much as we can I look forward to hearing your response as soon as possible (yoki at your earliest convinience) Yours faithfull Mrs. Ann

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this e-mail to express my deepest disappointment about the cancellation of the annual fundraiser dinner through lack of maintenance.

Without a doubt we had really
 prepared all our best, unfortunately our projects would have been/ were absentminded
. Could you imagine how do I feel troubled learning about that.

In The comma is probably missing here: "contrast, we".contrast, we
contrast we
 became aware of the fact that the annulment came up with a direct reason and it would be grateful if we are all members of the club This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 together and put up the money for our future Possible spelling mistake found.programprogramsprogram m
programm
/project as much as we can

I look forward to hearing your response as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible (Possible spelling mistake found.LokiYokoyokeyogi
yoki
 at your earliest Possible spelling mistake found.convenience
convinience
)

Yours Possible spelling mistake found.faithfulfaithfullyfaithfulsfaith fullfaithful l
faithfull


Mrs. Ann

IELTS letter Write an e-mail to the club secretary. Explain your feelings and make suggestion

Letter

American English

4 paragraphs

118 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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