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write an e-mail to a friend that you play squash with. Write your feelingsabout the closure of the sports hall and suggest possible alternatives. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes.

write an e-mail to a friend that you play squash with. Write your feelingsabout the closure of the sports hall and suggest possible alternatives. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes. pJ2jy
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Lola Bahronovna and I have been a SquishSquash member since 2020. I am writing an e-mail to express my deepest displeasure in connection with the closure of the pool and sports hall due to the current renovation court. I really appreciate it because the condo sports hall provided us with a very good sports venue during the passing time, however, I believe that the court will be officially run back as soon as possible. Therefore, I will offer some suggestions. The first one is that we would be very pleased if you could propose us another comfortable place and we can continue to prepare for participation in sports events. Another one is that you can allocate funds for us to use it in another sport court which we have chosen already on Maiden street while upgrading the court. I hope you will consider the points I have raised very carefully. Kind regards, XXX
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Lola
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Bahronovna
and I have been a
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SquishSquash
member since 2020. I am writing an e-mail to express my deepest displeasure in connection with the closure of the pool and
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sports
hall due to the
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current
renovation court.

I
really
appreciate it
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because
the condo
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sports
hall provided us with a
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very
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good
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sports
venue during the passing time,
however
, I believe that the court will be
officially
run back as
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soon
as possible.

Therefore
, I will offer
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some
suggestions. The
first
one is that we would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
if you could propose us another comfortable
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place and
we can continue to prepare for participation in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
. Another one is that you can allocate funds for us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
it in another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sport
court which we have chosen already on Maiden street while upgrading the court.

I hope you will consider the points I have raised
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
carefully
.

Kind regards,

XXX

IELTS letter write an e-mail to a friend that you play squash with. Write your feelingsabout the closure of the sports hall and suggest possible alternatives. Write about 50 words. You have 10 minutes.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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