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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat. aARRV
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request your permission to leave your rented flat two months prior to the contract period. My name is Lovedeep Kaur, working as a senior executive in Mahindra company. I have been renting the flat in Homeland Colony, Chandigarh. Actually, we have a rent agreement for one year starting from May 2021. As you know ver well, every month I paid my rent including other bills on time. This time I want a favour from you. Due to some unavoidable reasons I ought to free the flat two months earlier than agreed period. I am living here due to the fact of my office work but now my company issued my transfer order to another branch, which is beyond my control. As, I earlier said I already paid my all dues. I hope you can understand my situation and refund my security deposits. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Lovedeep Kaur.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to request your permission to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
your rented flat two months prior to the contract period.

My name is
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Lovedeep
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Kaur
, working as a senior executive in Mahindra
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company
. I have been renting the flat in Homeland Colony, Chandigarh.

Actually, we have a rent agreement for one year starting from May 2021. As you know
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ver
well, every month I paid my rent including other bills on time. This time I want a
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favour
from you. Due to
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some
unavoidable reasons I ought to free the flat two months earlier than
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agreed
period.

I am living here due to the fact of my office work
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but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
issued my transfer order to another branch, which is beyond my control.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
, I earlier said I already paid my all dues. I hope you can understand my situation and refund my security deposits.

I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
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soon
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Lovedeep
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Kaur
.
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IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
163 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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