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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient. I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him, for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments. I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible. Yours sincerely, Janice Kennedy

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I wish to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 into a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
next
 term. I would prefer a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.

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I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly
 visiting him, for another, he regularly
 holds noisy parties. In addition
, he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.

I am sure you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 solution is for me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 into a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore
, I would be grateful if you could find a single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 for me, preferably
 not in the same building This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as near to the college campus as possible.

Yours sincerely
,

Janice Kennedy