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You have seen on advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their who children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job Say what else you could do for the family Give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Beulah from India. I have seen your advertisement via job portal website about you are looking for language tutor for your kids. I am writing this letter to you to express my interest on this job. I have completed my master degree in languages and did certificate course in Hindi as well. I have a valuable knowledge and skills about this language and i would love to take this job. I am very confident that i would be able to teach to your kids in a interesting way with good communication skills since i have had seven years of working experience at school for sixty students where I have a good reputation and remarks for my work. Besides, apart from teaching, I know hand craft works which I can teach to your kids as well it might help and motivate them to learn more. By next year, I moving to Australia to visited my sister and the same time I wish to have a job and settle there. Fortunate, I found your job post and I hope you will consider me for this post. If you need any further information feel free to contact me via my email beulaviaksh@gmail. com I look forward hearing from you soon. yours sincerely, Beulah.

Dear Sir/Madam,

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