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You have seen on advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their who children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job Say what else you could do for the family Give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Beulah from India. I have seen your advertisement via job portal website about you are looking for language tutor for your kids. I am writing this letter to you to express my interest on this job. I have completed my master degree in languages and did certificate course in Hindi, as well have a valuable knowledge about this language, I would admire to take this job. I am extremely confident that I would be able to teach your kids with great understanding of communication since I have had seven years of working experience at school for sixty students where I have a good reputation and remarks for my work. Besides, apart from teaching, I know hand craft works which I can teach to your kids as well it might assist and motivate them to learn more. By next year, I will be moving to Australia to visit my sister and the same time I wish to have a job and settle there. In other words, this professional is my passion and I wanted to continue this job in Australia too. Fortunate, I found your job post and I hope you will consider me for this post. If you need any further information, feel free to contact me via my email beulaviaksh@gmail. Com. I look forward hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Beulah.
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Beulah from India. I have
seen
your advertisement via
job
portal website about you are looking for language tutor for your kids. I am writing this letter to you to express my interest on this job.

I
have completed my master degree in languages and did certificate course in Hindi,
as well
have a valuable knowledge about this language, I would admire to take this
job
.
I
am
extremely
confident that I would be able to teach your kids with great understanding of communication since I have had seven years of working experience at school for sixty students where I have a
good
reputation and remarks for my work.

Besides
, apart from teaching, I know
hand craft
works which I can teach to your kids
as well
it might assist and motivate them to learn more.

By
next
year, I will be moving to Australia to visit my sister and the same time I wish to have a
job
and settle there.
In other words
, this professional is my passion and I wanted to continue this
job
in Australia too. Fortunate, I found your
job
post and I hope you will consider me for this post. If you need any
further
information, feel free to contact me via my email
beulaviaksh@gmail
. Com.

I look forward hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Beulah.
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IELTS letter You have seen on advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their who children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter, Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job Say what else you could do for the family Give your reasons for wanting the job

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  American English
8 paragraphs
227 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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