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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and to request another room. Please allow me to give you the background for my request. I’m currently on a scholarship and in order to maintain it, I must maintain a minimum of an A- average. In order to achieve this, I have to study diligently every evening after classes. The major issue I am having is that I have a roommate who is a sports major and likes to work out in the room after classes, which makes a lot of noise. He also likes to invite his friends over to party until the wee hours, which is making it difficult for me to sleep well. The type of room that would suit me best would be a single room. However, if this is not possible, I would like to change to a room with someone who is quiet and also focused on studying. Yours faithfully Samuel Taylor
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and to request another room.

Please
allow
me to give you the background for my request. I’m
currently
on a scholarship and in order to maintain it, I
must
maintain a minimum of an A- average. In order to achieve this, I
have to
study
diligently
every evening after classes.

The major issue I am having is that I have a roommate who is a sports major and likes to work out in the
room
after classes, which
makes
a lot of
noise. He
also
likes to invite his friends over to party until the wee hours, which is making it difficult for me to sleep well.

The type of
room
that would suit me best would be a single
room
.
However
, if this is not possible, I would like to
change
to a
room
with someone who is quiet and
also
focused on studying.

Yours
faithfully


Samuel Taylor
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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