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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my school room, I have been sharing with a partner for long time ago and, I feel that I need my own space, I am not happy at all with the noise at night time, my partner plays guitar then he needs to practice and, the only time that he can do this is when I arrive because coincidentally we finish at the same time our last class. I can have a properly rest or go for sleep early because he practices until late. However I had a chat with him last week, trying to organise a schedule according to my classes and he too, but it is difficult to fix it, I suggested him to practice at the theatre, I know that during the week there are special hours when the students can go enjoy the stage and be free at there, it could be a possibility. While my partner try to have a better idea, I would like to request another room, it means my own space I really need my privacy a place when I can stay relax after my classes. The accomodation could be a small room with a bathroom, a single bed and the most important thing a desk for my computer and my books. Yours faithfully, Ginna Brown

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my The noun “schoolroom” is spelled as one word.schoolroom
school room
, I have been sharing with a partner for long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 ago and, I feel that I need my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 space, I am not happy at all with the noise at night You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
, my partner plays guitar then he needs to practice and, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 that he can do this is when I arrive This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
coincidentally
 we finish at the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 our last This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
. I can have a You used an adverb (‘properly’) instead of an adjective, or a noun (‘rest’) instead of another adjective.proper rest
properly rest
 or go for sleep early This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 he practices until late. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 I had a chat with him last week, trying to Possible spelling mistake. ‘organise’ is British English.organize
organise
 a schedule according to my classes and he too, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is difficult to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it, I suggested him to practice at the Possible spelling mistake. ‘theatre’ is British English.theater
theatre
, I know that during the week there are special hours when the students can go enjoy the stage and be free at there, it could be a possibility. While my partner try to have a better This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
, I would like to request another room, it means my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 space I really
 need my privacy a place when I can stay relax after my classes. The Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
 could be a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 room with a bathroom, a single bed and the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing a desk for my computer and my books.

Yours faithfully
,

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Ginna
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