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Write an email to the credit card company in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: Describe the problem with your credit card statement. Explain why you are certain that the charge is a mistake. Explain how you would like the problem to be solved.

Dear Sir/Madame, I have been using the same credit card for over 10 years issued by your reputed bank and never faced any issues while my usage. But, I have come across some anonymous charges amounting $50 in the last bill statement. The transaction surely seems to be not done by me and the amount is also very high as I usually use my credit cards for small payments and always ensure that I never exceed my monthly spend beyond $20. Also remarks in the statement states that the transaction was made on 20th January, but I am sure that I did not go out for dinner. I request you to raise an internal ticket and get the transaction checked in your internal system or you might get it cross-verified from the restaurant where this transaction has been recorded. I hope for the resolution of wrong charges at the earliest Yours Thankfully, John
Dear Sir/Madame,

I have been using the same credit card for over 10 years issued by your reputed bank and never faced any issues while my usage.
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, I have
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come
across
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anonymous charges amounting $50 in the last bill statement.

The
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transaction
surely
seems to be not done by me and the amount is
also
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high as I
usually
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use
my credit cards for
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small
payments and always ensure that I never exceed my monthly spend beyond $20.
Also
remarks in the statement states that the
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transaction
was made
on 20th January,
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but
I am sure that I did not go out for dinner.

I request you to raise an internal ticket and
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get
the
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transaction
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checked
in your internal
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system or
you might
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get
it cross-verified from the restaurant where this
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transaction
has
been recorded
. I hope for the resolution of
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wrong
charges at the
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earliest


Yours
Thankfully
,

John

IELTS letter Write an email to the credit card company in about 150-200 words. Your email should do the following things: Describe the problem with your credit card statement. Explain why you are certain that the charge is a mistake. Explain how you would like the problem to be solved.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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