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One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, apologise for missing the birthday celebration explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,

Dear Arun, Sorry, I took so long to write to you but I put my pen to paper to explain why I didn't come to your birthday celebration. To be honest, I have been feeling so guilty that I missed your important day. I'm so very sorry. I know how important that day was for you. What happend is that I had been promoted to general manager and company asked me to present my experience infront of other employee. I know, how important was that for me for this opportunity. So, I had to work for my presentation. Being busy in my presentation, I forgot to tell you about all those things. Anyway, I have bought a beautiful gift for you. I wish you'll love it. I have made a plan to visit you next week if you have a time. And, I'm so sorry for the delay in telling you and I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes Sameer
Dear Arun,

Sorry, I took
so
long to write to you
but
I put my pen to paper to
explain
why I didn't
come
to your birthday celebration.

To be honest, I have been feeling
so
guilty that I missed your
important
day. I'm
so
very
sorry. I know how
important
that day was for you.

What
happend
is that I had
been promoted
to general manager and
company
asked me to present my experience
infront
of other employee. I know, how
important
was that for me for this opportunity.
So
, I had to work for my presentation. Being busy in my presentation, I forgot to
tell
you about all those things.

Anyway, I have
bought
a
beautiful
gift for you. I wish you'll
love
it. I have made a plan to visit you
next
week if you have a time.

And, I'm
so
sorry for the delay in telling you and I hope you can forgive me.

Best wishes

Sameer
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IELTS letter One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, apologise for missing the birthday celebration explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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