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You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter say where and when the class will be held give reasons why you think your friend might be interested suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear…

I came across an advertisement in the local newspaper about the cooking class in the National University of Singapore (NUS). Training classes will be held at the auditorium A1B, which is in the health and life style department campus adjacent to gate number 3. Course will be conducted on Monday, Friday, saturday and sunday. They've arranged the sessions in the evening (6: 00pm to 8: 00pm) on working days and on the weekend, it is the afternoon from 3: 00pm to 6: 00pm. In my opinion it suits best for you because of their excellent timing arrangements. On weekdays you can attend after your job hours and on the weekend in the noon session, so that as a sleeping beauty, you will have ample time to sleep and comfortably can reach to the NUS campus for the scheduled timing in the late afternoon. Regarding this course, I would like to meet up and explain in detail. Let's meet at 5: 00 pm in the Food Loft coffee shop. I am confident enough that you will like it and we can join together. Yours lovingly, Elango

I came across an advertisement in the local newspaper about the cooking This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 in the National University of Singapore (NUS).

Training classes will be held
 at the auditorium A1B, which is in the health and This noun is normally spelled as one word.lifestyle
life style
 department campus adjacent to gate number 3. Course will be conducted
 on Monday, Friday, Possible spelling mistake found.SaturdaySaturdayssturdy
saturday
 and Possible spelling mistake found.SundaySundayssundrysundaeSundassun day
sunday
. They've arranged the sessions in the evening (6: 00pm to 8: 00pm) on working days and on the weekend, it is the afternoon from 3: 00pm to 6: 00pm.

In my opinion it suits best for you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of their excellent timing arrangements. On The comma is probably missing here: “weekdays, you”.weekdays, you
weekdays you
 can attend after your job hours and on the weekend in the noon session, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that as a sleeping beauty, you will have ample time to sleep and comfortably
 can reach to the NUS campus for the scheduled timing in the late afternoon.

Regarding this course, I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 up and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 in detail. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 at 5: 00 pm in the Food Loft coffee shop. I am confident This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 that you will like Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).it, and
it and
 we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 together.

Yours lovingly
,

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Elango