Dear Sir,
My name is Jim, third year student at your esteemed college and I am writing this letter to bring it your attention that I find extremely difficult to concentrate on my studies in the dorm assigned to me.
The dorm itself is not only open, refreshing and airy but it is also pretty pleasant to study and work on my project work. However, I have been facing issues with my new roommate. He has made total nuisance in our space.
My previous roommate recently left to another college and the accommodation is assigned to a new student. He is extremely outgoing and outspoken person, who likes to party and play music all night. As a result of that, I am not able to sleep well at night and not able to study in class. My whole routine has turned upside down because of his habits.
I would like you to consider allocating me a similar dorm with someone who is sensible and humble towards others. It would be absolutely beneficial to improve my concentration and academic records.
I hope to hear back from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Jim
Dear Sir,
My name is Jim, third year student at your esteemed
college and
I am writing this letter to bring it your attention that I find
extremely
difficult to concentrate on my studies in the dorm assigned to me.
The dorm itself is not
only
open, refreshing and airy
but
it is
also
pretty pleasant to study and work on my project work.
However
, I have been facing issues with my new roommate. He has made total nuisance in our space.
My previous roommate recently
left
to another college and the accommodation
is assigned
to a new student. He is
extremely
outgoing and outspoken person, who likes to party and play music all night.
As a result
of that, I am not able to sleep well at night and not able to study in
class
. My whole routine has turned upside down
because
of his habits.
I would like you to consider allocating me a similar dorm with someone who is sensible and humble towards others. It would be
absolutely
beneficial to
improve
my concentration and academic records.
I hope to hear back from you
soon
.
Yours
sincerely
,
Jim