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One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills, and vocabulary.

One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills, and vocabulary. AEAM
Dear Rose, It is wonderful to hear that you are moving to Sydney for a summer exchange semester and would like to improve your English to be able to communicate better during your time in Australia. I’m really happy that you wrote to me for advice. I think that it is a fantastic idea for you to want to develop stronger communication skills and there are various ways for you to achieve your goal of speaking the language better. There are numerous excellent internet resources that provide free English language lessons to aspiring students, which can be beneficial to you in not only improving your grammar but also your vocabulary. Language applications and other software programs, such as Grammarly, offer complimentary grammar checking to help you practice your English online. There are also many mobile applications that can be downloaded on your phone and which provide feedback, which you can use to record yourself while practicing your English-speaking skills. On the other hand, the internet is also full of foreigners, who themselves do not have a sound grasp of the language, trying to give tips to other students. You might want to stay away from those. To work on your listening and speaking skills, I suggest watching Hollywood movies and listening to English music. I believe that the most fun and productive way to learn a new language is through the entertainment media. That said, let me know if you feel that you would like a professional tutor to give you individual classes. I will give you the contact information of a wonderful teacher I personally know. Best wishes, Rosie
Dear Rose,

It is wonderful to hear that you are moving to Sydney for a summer exchange semester and would like to
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improve
your English to be able to communicate better during your time in Australia. I’m
really
happy that you wrote to me for advice.

I
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think
that it is a fantastic
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idea
for you to want to develop stronger communication
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skills
and there are various ways for you to achieve your goal of speaking the
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language
better. There are numerous excellent internet resources that provide free English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
lessons to aspiring students, which can be beneficial to you in not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
improving your grammar
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but
also
your vocabulary.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Language
applications and other software programs, such as
Grammarly
, offer complimentary grammar checking to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you practice your English online. There are
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
mobile applications that can
be downloaded
on your phone and which provide feedback, which you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
to record yourself while practicing your English-speaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
On the other hand
, the internet is
also
full of foreigners, who themselves do not have a sound grasp of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, trying to give tips to other students. You might want to stay away from those.

To work on your listening and speaking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, I suggest watching Hollywood movies and listening to English music. I believe that the most fun and productive way to learn a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
is through the entertainment media. That said,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you feel that you would like a professional tutor to give you individual classes. I will give you the contact information of a wonderful teacher I
personally
know.

Best wishes,

Rosie

IELTS letter One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills, and vocabulary.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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