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you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer bR2l
Dear Sir, I am going to tell you about my problems that I have to face because of my accommodation in college. I am sharing this room with another student. However, I cannot concentrate on my work due to her loud noise. Most of the time, she talks on the phone so loudly which creates disturbance in the room. Secondly, I need privacy but when her friends spend plenty of time in my room, I cannot even get that too. it is my humble request to you if you can arrange any other room for me, it will be good. I shall be very thankful to you. Yours faithfully, Raman
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Raman

IELTS letter you live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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