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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Lkq3

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in connection with the advertisement in "Sydney Today" magazine dated March 10, 2021 related to home care of a young child for about half year. I'm interested in this job as I enjoy my time while taking good care of young ones along with teaching them necessary skills for their age. I also offer other home services for elders who may need medical assistance while staying with you. Moreover, as a trained care provider, I have 8 years of past experience, including 3 years dedicatedly assigned for kids below the age of 7 years indicating a clear evidence of my ability. While this would be my first visit to the country, I would love to explore various places in and around the city in my spare time. Additionally, I would be happy to provide any references you may need. Yours Faithfully John Doe

Dear Sir or Madam,

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good
 care of young ones along with teaching them necessary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 for their age. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 offer other home services for elders who may need medical assistance while staying with you. Moreover
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past experience
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clear
 evidence of my ability. While this would be my first
 visit to the country, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to explore various places in and around the city in my spare time.

Additionally
, I would be happy to provide any references you may need.

Yours Faithfully


John Doe