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Reporting a lost item to the manager of the railway

Reporting a lost item to the manager of the railway gK17

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to report about a lost item. It looks that while I was inside the metro I had left my shopping bag. Last Thursday on 4th of March I took the train from Rashidia to Jafiliya metro station at 12 noon seated in the single chair exactly at the right side allocated in the women and children aisle I had the shopping bags with me and I placed it underneath but unfortunately I was in a hurry and I must have forgotten it on the train. It was a large with a white back ground shopping bag and had the logo of Dyson company with the photo of hair styler Fushia color. Inside the huge bag there are other boxes the first box is the largest and black in color it contains the Airwrap hair styler and the other four small boxes holds the extension parts of device. As you can imagine these valuable items are extremely important. Kindly let me know if you have my shopping bag and how I can get it back. Write to me a on a return address or email. Thank you for your consideration Nuha

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to report about a lost item. It looks that while I was inside the metro I had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
. Last Thursday on 4th of March I took the train from Possible spelling mistake found.Rashida
Rashidia
 to Possible spelling mistake found.BasilicaJailingAmiliaVasiliy
Jafiliya
 metro station at 12 noon seated in the single chair exactly The usual prepositions to use when in contact with the side is "on" not "in". Did you mean "on the right side"?on the right side
at the right side
 allocated in the women and children aisle I had the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bags
 with me and I placed it underneath This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 unfortunately I was in a hurry and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have forgotten it on the train. It was a large with a white back ground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 and had the logo of Dyson This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with the photo of hair styler Possible spelling mistake found.RussiaFasciaSushiUSIAFuchsiaFushun
Fushia
 color. Inside the huge You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 there are other boxes the first
 box is the largest and black in color it contains the Possible spelling mistake found.Air wrap
Airwrap
 hair styler and the other four This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 boxes holds the extension parts of device. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you can imagine these valuable items are extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
. Kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me know if you have my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbriefcasebackpackpursesackkitpocket
bag
 and how I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it back. Write to me Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 on a return address or email.

Thank you for your consideration

Possible spelling mistake found.NUMANu ha
Nuha