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You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take 8E0G
Dear Sir, I am Megha Joshi and I had stayed in Holiday Inn at Ahmedabad on 22nd and 23rd February 2021. During my visit in summer, the temperature was already at its peak and the air-conditioning system was defective. The air-conditioner had 26 degrees set in the system and temperature of the room could not be lowered any further. I had also called up the reception, however, they said nothing could be done about it. There was no extra room where I could switch. I had to look for another hotel in the area to rest comfortably, unfortunately, was not able to find one because of the peak season. So, the fan had to be kept on full speed due to the heat, even though it does not suit me. I would like you to refund at least 50 percent of the accommodation fee which was paid since I did not enjoy the stay. It would be great if it could be done within 5 working days. Hoping to get my refund. Yours faithfully, MJ
Dear Sir,

I am
Megha
Joshi and I had stayed in Holiday Inn at Ahmedabad on 22nd and 23rd February 2021. During my visit in summer, the temperature was already at its peak and the air-conditioning system was defective.

The air-conditioner had 26 degrees set in the system and temperature of the room could not
be lowered
any
further
. I had
also
called up the reception,
however
, they said nothing could
be done
about it. There was no extra room where I could switch.

I had to look for another hotel in the area to rest
comfortably
, unfortunately, was not able to find one
because
of the peak season.
So
, the fan had to be
kept
on full speed due to the heat,
even though
it does not suit me.

I would like you to refund at least 50 percent of the accommodation fee which
was paid
since I did not enjoy the stay. It would be great if it could
be done
within 5 working days.

Hoping to
get
my refund.

Yours
faithfully
,

MJ
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IELTS letter You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

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