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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer RN5OP
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Fadi khadra, i am sharing a room in the campus with another student. The room number is 202. I am having problems with my colleague who is not respecting the rules of shared accomodation settled by the campus. Despite that I tried hard talking with my colleague to solve the problem, he is not cooperating. The problem reside in the fact that he is always inviting people and arranging parties for them. As a consequence, I find myself unable to focuso my studies especially during the exams period. Being unable to solve the problem with the other student, i suggest if you could arrange my transfer to another room as soon as possible. My only request is share my accomodation with a more responsible and quiet person, so we can both fosus on our education. Hope you can solve my issue as soon as possible. Best regards. Fadi.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
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Fadi
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khadra
,
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i
am sharing a room in the campus with another student. The room number is 202. I am having
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problems
with my colleague who is not respecting the
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rules
of shared
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accomodation
settled by the campus.

Despite that I tried
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hard
talking with my colleague to solve the
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problem
, he is not cooperating. The
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problem
reside in the fact that he is always inviting
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people
and arranging parties for them. As a consequence, I find myself unable to
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focuso
my studies
especially
during the exams period.

Being unable to solve the
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problem
with the other student,
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i
suggest if you could arrange my transfer to another room as
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soon
as possible. My
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only
request is share my
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accomodation
with a more responsible and quiet person,
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so
we can both
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fosus
on our education.

Hope you can solve my issue as
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soon
as possible.

Best regards.

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Fadi
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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