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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job wBKln

Dear Sir, My name is Arvinder Singh and I am writing this letter in connection with the job in City Museum, which I saw in the local newspaper. I am very much interested in this job during the holidays. I believe I will be a great candidate for this job as I have 2 years of experience in Customer Service and I am a graduate in Business Management. I can use my knowledge and experience in the field of management to a greater extent. While studying in the college, I have also led our Hockey team to university finals, which makes me a good leader and allowed to develop my analytical skills. I am very much interested in this job because I want to explore new areas of interest while working at Museum. I will also get the opportunity to interact with different personalities and enhance my knowledge about the social interests. I would appreciate if you could consider me for this job. I can assure you that I wil not disappoint you for the opportunity provided. Your faithfully, Arvinder Singh

Dear Sir,

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job
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because
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get
 the opportunity to interact with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 personalities and enhance my knowledge about the social interests.

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 not disappoint you for the opportunity provided.

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Arvinder
 Singh