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Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you Write at least 150 words.

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you bYQwW
Dear Ajay and Sunita, Greetings! ! Trust this letter finds you in good health. Recently I received the photos you sent me of our vacation at the Bahamas last month. Oh, it was such a wonderful time. I never imagined that you will make a collage of the photos & share it. I am delighted to have the Bahama collage. We should plan a trip to Europe for the summers. I would have loved to write earlier to you, but after reaching back I was swamped with work like never before. My entire team had to work consecutively for two weekends, which we had never done before since the financial year was approaching. Why don't you come during the last weekend of April and stay with us since it is an extended weekend due to the local festival? Would be happy to host you both. Will await your confirmation. Warm Wishes, Abhishek
Dear Ajay and
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Sunita
,

Greetings! ! Trust this letter finds you in
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good
health.

Recently I received the photos you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
me of our vacation at the Bahamas last month. Oh, it was such a wonderful time. I never imagined that you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a collage of the photos & share it. I
am delighted
to have the Bahama collage. We should plan a trip to Europe for the summers.

I would have
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loved
to write earlier to you,
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but
after reaching back I
was swamped
with work like never
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before
. My entire team had to work
consecutively
for two weekends, which we had never done
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
since the financial year was approaching.

Why don't you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
during the last weekend of April and stay with us since it is an extended weekend due to the local festival? Would be happy to host you both. Will await your confirmation.

Warm Wishes,

Abhishek

IELTS letter Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didn’t write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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