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You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you AjPX1
Dear Tom, It's been so long time since we last were in touch but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time that we spent together. Your relatives are awesome, your grandmother's pastry is delicious. Tell her that I miss it. And the boat that your pa made for us is exquisite. Do you remember how many fish we caught that day, it was exceptional. How are you doing there? Are you keeping playing the computer game that we started to enjoy with you. I hope that you'll at least the same amount of pleasure after visiting my place. By the way, you are drastically invited to my house. Moreover, all my family insist on it, you ought to arrive to us on this winter holiday. We will snowball and make a snowman. Furthermore, I have a lake near my house, thus we could skate on the ice, believe me it's amazing. I'm looking forward to your reply. With best wishes, Alex Star
Dear Tom,

It's been
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long time since we last were in touch
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but
I haven't forgotten the wonderful time that we spent together. Your relatives are awesome, your grandmother's pastry is delicious.
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Tell
her that I miss it. And the boat that your pa made for us is exquisite. Do you remember how
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many
fish we caught that day, it was exceptional. How are you doing there? Are you keeping playing the computer game that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to enjoy with you. I hope that you'll at least the same amount of pleasure after visiting my place.

By the way, you are
drastically
invited to my
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house
.
Moreover
, all my family insist on it, you ought to arrive to us on this winter holiday. We will snowball and
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make
a snowman.
Furthermore
, I have a lake near my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
,
thus
we could skate on the ice, believe me it's amazing.

I'm looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes,

Alex Star

IELTS letter You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time. say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her invite your friend to visit you

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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