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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accomodation officer at the college. In the letter, describe the situation .explain your problem and why it is difficult to work .say what kind of accomodation you would prefer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that discontent with my current living conditions. While the accommodation itself is spacious, my housemate's behavior has become unbearable making it tough for me to work. Let me elaborate my situation. The problem began about three months ago when my cotenant first moved in. Previously, everything was fine; my old housemate was extremely considerate. My current roommate however, stays up all night to play incessantly loud music and party every weekend with friends. Due to this, sleeping is not enjoyable for me and hence unable to concentrate adequately on my studies. In this situation, I would be most grateful you relocate me or my housemate to a different room on the contrary, I would prefer to live with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others. As long as it is quite, I do not mind whom I live with. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Priscilla Smith.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
you know that discontent with my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
living conditions. While the accommodation itself is spacious, my housemate's behavior has become unbearable making it tough for me to work.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me elaborate my situation. The problem began about three months ago when my cotenant
first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
in. Previously, everything was fine; my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
housemate was
extremely
considerate. My
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
roommate
however
, stays up all night to play
incessantly
loud music and party every weekend with friends. Due to this, sleeping is not enjoyable for me and
hence
unable to concentrate
adequately
on my studies.

In this situation, I would be most grateful you relocate me or my housemate to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
room
on the contrary
, I would prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with someone who is quieter and more considerate of others.

As long as it is quite, I do not mind whom I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Priscilla Smith.

IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. write a letter to the accomodation officer at the college. In the letter, describe the situation. explain your problem and why it is difficult to work. say what kind of accomodation you would prefer

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