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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer MK9k

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with reference to the accomodation facility that i have signed up for in college. I am sharing room with a fellow student, however there are certain irregularities with the arrangements that i would like to discuss with you. I am a diploma student which means my stay in college is only for 3 months, this is the reason why i choose to have a room on sharing and a small room in the corner of the building, my study schedule is demanding and i stay awake all night to complete my assignments and sleep during the evening time as i have classes in morning. There is construction work going on in the backyard, which causes disturbance and consequently i am unable to focus on my studies due to lack of sleep Moreover the windows of the room are broken. After the storm last night the room was a mess, everything was drained. All these problems are because, the room is in the corner of the buidling. Hence I request you to please change my room considering my situation. I would prefer a room on the second floor as most of the rooms are vacant there so its a quiet space to focus on my studies. I hope you consider my concerns and change my room as soon as possible. Best regards, Smith

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with reference to the Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
 facility that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have signed up for in college. I am sharing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 with a fellow student, however
 there are certain irregularities with the arrangements that Did you mean "I"?I
i
 would like to discuss with you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am a diploma student which means my stay in college is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 for 3 months, this is the reason why Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 choose to have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 on sharing and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 in the corner of the building, my study schedule is demanding and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 stay awake all night to complete my assignments and sleep during the evening time as Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 have classes in morning.

There is construction work going on in the backyard, which causes disturbance and consequently
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am unable to focus on my studies due to lack of sleep Moreover
 the windows of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
are broken
. After the storm last night the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 was a mess, everything was drained
.

All these problems are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 is in the corner of the Possible spelling mistake found.buildingbundlingbridlingbu idling
buidling
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 I request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 considering my situation. I would prefer a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 on the second floor as most of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
 are vacant there This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 a quiet space to focus on my studies.

I hope you consider my concerns and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Best regards,

Smith