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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract. eXyx
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Dave and I have been renting your apartment from past 6 months which is located on the Hamilton street. I am sure you are aware about that I always pay the rent on time as well as take care of the things. Yesterday, my manager transferred me to the company’s other branch, and I have to go there to continue my job. Because of this situation, I am afraid that I have to break the rental agreement, as I cannot stay here anymore. I was a responsible tenant and there is no damage to the apartment, you can visit in order to confirm it. I am requesting you to allow me to leave prior to the end of the contract, and also wish that you would refund the deposit of two months at your earliest convenience. You can send the deposit to my bank account which I gave you at the time of signing the agreement. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Dave Batisita
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Dave and I have been renting your apartment from past 6 months which
is located
on the Hamilton street. I am sure you are aware about that I always pay the rent on time
as well
as take care of the things.

Yesterday, my manager transferred me to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s other branch, and I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go there to continue my job.
Because of this
situation, I am afraid that I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
break the rental agreement, as I cannot stay here anymore.

I was a responsible tenant and there is no damage to the apartment, you can visit in order to confirm it. I am requesting you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
prior to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the contract, and
also
wish that you would refund the deposit of two months at your earliest convenience. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the deposit to my bank account which I gave you at the time of signing the agreement.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dave
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Batisita
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IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter • introduce yourself • ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes • explain why you need to break the contract.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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