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Over-fishing has become a very common practice in many countries. What do you think are the effects of over-fishing?

Over-fishing has become a very common practice in many countries. What do you think are the effects of over-fishing? 7o1k
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you regarding the flight from New Delhi to Frankfurt on 20th February which I have missed due to mismanagement at the airport. As when I reached the airport, I went through the security check and I was just going to checked in my bags at the counter of the airline when a security personnel came to me and asked me to follow him for interrogation without any reason. Due to this incident, I got late for the important business meeting of our company in Frankfurt because of which I called my employer to inform about my delay. It was quite frustrating as my whole plan was distorted due to this incident. Although, in order to rectify this issue, I would like you to provide me next flight on 22 February without charging me extra on the ticket so that I can reach my destination. I hope you will get back to me soon. Yours Sincerely Ryan
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to you regarding the flight from New Delhi to Frankfurt on 20th February which I have missed due to mismanagement at the airport. As when I reached the airport, I went through the security
check
and I was
just
going to
checked
in my bags at the counter of the airline when a security personnel came to me and asked me to follow him for interrogation without any reason.

Due to this incident, I
got
late for the
important
business meeting of our
company
in Frankfurt
because
of which I called my employer to inform about my delay. It was quite frustrating as my whole plan
was distorted
due to this incident.

Although, in order to rectify this issue, I would like you to provide me
next
flight on 22 February without charging me extra on the ticket
so
that I can reach my destination. I hope you will
get
back to me
soon
.

Yours
Sincerely


Ryan
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IELTS letter Over-fishing has become a very common practice in many countries. What do you think are the effects of over-fishing?

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6.5
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