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You live in a room in college which you share with another student .however there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work write a letter to to the accommodation office at college in the letter describe the situation explain your problem and why it's difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. however there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work write a letter to to the accommodation office at college in the letter describe the situation explain your problem and why it's difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer 6x6Al
Dear john, I hope that you are well? I am alash sanjel from kathmandu nepal. However, I am the students in your university over the last 2 years. I am writing a letter to let you know about the problem with roommate Well, there are lots of problem that I am facing in your apartment. Moreover, in the recent weeks ago I have joined the ielts class from well certified consultancy. Thus, I am preparing for my ielts exam and planning to take my exam next month. Likewise, my roommate play a loud music and talking long hour with friends and I am not focusing on my studies. similarly, these course are very significant for me because it's proves my english level to apply for the university. I would like to request you that if you could provide me a separate room that would be very good for me and my studies too. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours sincerely, Alash sanjel
Dear john, I hope that you are well? I am
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from
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you know about the problem with roommate Well, there are
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that I am facing in your apartment.
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, in the recent weeks ago I have
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joined
the
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class
from well certified consultancy.
Thus
, I am preparing for my
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exam and planning to take my exam
next
month.
Likewise
, my roommate play a loud music and talking long hour with
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friends and
I am not focusing on my studies.
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similarly
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these course
are
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significant for me
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it's proves my
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level to
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apply for the university
. I would like to request you that if you could provide me a separate room that would be
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very
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good
for me and my studies too. I look forward to your quick reply. Yours
sincerely
,
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Alash
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sanjel
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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. however there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work write a letter to to the accommodation office at college in the letter describe the situation explain your problem and why it's difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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163 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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