Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You have been advised by the manager to conduct a short session in school and share your work experience with the students. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school and say - Who are you and what kind of job do you do? - What are you planning to talk about? - What equipment will you need to use?

You have been advised by the manager to conduct a short session in school and share your work experience with the students. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school and say - Who are you and what kind of job do you do? - What are you planning to talk about? - What equipment will you need to use? BJaAX
Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Penny D. Today I am writing this letter in regard to a short demonstration of my work that I want to conduct at your schools. I am a web developer and working for Acme pty. ltd. As the name suggests I design and develop websites for companies, especially e- commerce websites. I believe that my practical knowledge about computers and web would aid students to comprehend exact work challenges and requirements. As a result, they would become more provident and competent in this fast-paced era. As I have been asked by my manager to disseminate my work experiences among pupils, I felt really keen on doing so because by sharing my skills I would eventually help the youth to understand different aspects of work environment. In this session, I will talk about the computer and the broad job spectrum rendered by this field. These apart, I will give a short speech on web technology; and it’s advantages and disadvantages so that students could come to know both pros and cons of Information technology. In order to deliver this brief message, I have prepared a power point presentation to engage the interest of my audience; and to show this presentation I will need a projector and computer system. I believe that this will raise your interest as the students of your school will acquire information technology skills which may help them in their future job prospects. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you very much. kind regards, Penny D
Dear Sir/ Madam,

My name is Penny D.
Today
I am writing this letter in regard to a short demonstration of my
work
that I want to conduct at your schools. I am a web developer and working for Acme
pty
.
ltd
. As the name suggests I design and develop websites for
companies
,
especially
e- commerce websites. I believe that my practical knowledge about computers and web would aid students to comprehend exact
work
challenges and requirements.
As a result
, they would become more provident and competent in this
fast
-paced era.

As I have
been asked
by my manager to disseminate my
work
experiences among pupils, I felt
really
keen on doing
so
because
by sharing my
skills
I would
eventually
help
the youth to understand
different
aspects of
work
environment. In this session, I will talk about the computer and the broad job spectrum rendered by this field. These apart, I will give a short speech on web technology; and it’s advantages and disadvantages
so
that students could
come
to know both pros and cons of Information technology.

In order to deliver this brief message, I have prepared a
power point
presentation to engage the interest of my audience; and to
show
this presentation I will need a projector and computer system. I believe that this will raise your interest as the students of your school will acquire information technology
skills
which may
help
them in their future job prospects.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
. Thank you
very
much.

kind
regards,

Penny D
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You have been advised by the manager to conduct a short session in school and share your work experience with the students. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school and say - Who are you and what kind of job do you do? - What are you planning to talk about? - What equipment will you need to use?

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic: