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You ordered equipment online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell: Giving the details about the equipment Explain the damage Suggest what you want the manager to do.

You ordered equipment online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell: Giving the details about the equipment Explain the damage Suggest what you want the manager to do. jR5yL
Dear sir, I am vikas, and I am writing this letter to express my sheer annoyance regarding gutted buying experience that I recently had at your bogus website www. Alibaba. com. A week ago, I received a notification from your e-commerce site about a renowned MI power bank 20, 000 MAH which was available at 50% discount, and that time I was looking for the same; Hence, I placed order. After 3 working days, I received the package. I was seriously excited but my excitement ruined when I opened it. At first glance it was really good, latter on I found its display and charging pin were broken. I tried to fix it up but I did not work. Consequently, I lodged a complaint for this. As a solution, I want from you to either replace it with genuine one or refund the respective price. My order number is PDS75767; for reference I annexed invoice herewith. I hope you should look after this at priority. Sincerely, Vikas kanda
Dear sir,

I am
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vikas
, and I am writing this letter to express my sheer annoyance regarding gutted buying experience that I recently had at your bogus website
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www
. Alibaba.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
.

A week ago, I received a notification from your e-commerce site about a renowned MI power bank 20, 000 MAH which was available at 50% discount, and that time I was looking for the same;
Hence
, I placed order.

After 3 working days, I received the package. I was
seriously
excited
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
my excitement ruined when I opened it. At
first
glance it was
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
, latter on I found its display and charging pin
were broken
. I tried to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
it up
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I did not work.
Consequently
, I lodged a complaint for this.

As a solution, I want from you to either replace it with genuine one or refund the respective price. My order number is PDS75767; for reference I annexed invoice herewith.

I hope you should look after this at priority.

Sincerely
,

Vikas
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kanda
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IELTS letter You ordered equipment online. However, when you received it, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell: Giving the details about the equipment Explain the damage Suggest what you want the manager to do.

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  American English
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167 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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