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You live in a room at the college which you share with another student .There are problems with working with her.

You live in a room at the college which you share with another student. There are problems with working with her. nxYL7
Dear Mr Brown I am writing to complain about my flatmate who I currently share my room. at the college. We usually arguments with her. Although both of us have same rights, she does not want to share things similarly. Particularly, She is always putting her things everywhere. And also she never clean up the room. In addition, She has extra course for driving. So she come lately which disturb my sleep. Also She is so sensitive anf aggressive. Even minor things we have a lot of arguments that causse tto lose my temper during the day. As a solution, I suggest that I will be moved to other room or talk. with her personally. I hope you will deal with this matter soon. Yours faithfully Jane
Dear Mr Brown I am writing to complain about my flatmate who I
currently
share my room.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
at
the college. We
A verb is probably missing after 'usually'.
usually arguments
with her. Although both of us have same rights, she does not want to share things
similarly
.
Particularly
, She is always putting her things everywhere. And
also
It seems that a verb is missing.
she
never clean up the room.
In addition
, She has extra course for driving.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
lately which disturb my sleep.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
She is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
sensitive
Possible spelling mistake found.
anf
aggressive. Even minor things we have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
arguments that
Possible spelling mistake found.
causse
Possible spelling mistake found.
tto
lose my temper during the day. As a solution, I suggest that I will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to other room or talk.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
with
her
personally
. I hope you will deal with this matter
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
. Yours
faithfully
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Jane
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IELTS letter You live in a room at the college which you share with another student. There are problems with working with her.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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