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This is part of a letter you receive from an english penfriend,Petter: A new gym has opened near my house. I go there twice a week.What sports facilities are available near where you live ? How often do you do sport?

This is part of a letter you receive from an english penfriend, Petter: A new gym has opened near my house. I go there twice a week. What sports facilities are available near where you live? How often do you do sport? N3Ebd
I'm excited to learn that a new gym has launched close to your home. It might be beneficial for individuals in the community who wish to workout in a gym, in my opinion. I'm also fortunate in that there is a gym within walking distance of my home. I go there three times a week to stay in shape. There are a variety of sporting facilities available, including a virtual machine running, weightlifting room, and cardio-vascular training area. I feel comfortable whenever I go there, and I can comfortably go asleep after a workout. I believe that everyone should workout at a gym. I hope you’ll come and try the gym happily.
I'm excited to learn that a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gym
has launched close to your home. It might be beneficial for individuals in the community who wish to workout in a
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gym
, in my opinion.

I'm
also
fortunate in that there is a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gym
within walking distance of my home.

I go there three times a week to stay in shape.

There are a variety of sporting facilities available, including a virtual machine running, weightlifting room, and cardio-vascular training area.

I feel comfortable whenever I go there, and I can
comfortably
go asleep after a workout. I believe that everyone should workout at a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
gym
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you’ll
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come
and try the
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gym
happily
.
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IELTS letter This is part of a letter you receive from an english penfriend, Petter: A new gym has opened near my house. I go there twice a week. What sports facilities are available near where you live? How often do you do sport?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
112 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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