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Complaining about college’s facilities

Complaining about college’s facilities jDN0L

Dear Sir, I am a second year student of your design faculty, my name is Daria. I am writing this letter to complain about insufficient facilities, supported to our college. There are about 50 students in our group, so we all need instruments for our work. As you know, designers have to practise more than to study theory, consequently each student should have computer and graphic pad. But unfortunately, our group have only 30 computers and 40 pads, that’s why we have to work in turn. It is quite badly influence on our curriculum, for the reason that we aren’t able to manage our tack at one time. Moreover, we are forced to buy these graphic pads that cost an arm and a leg. Despite necessary practise, we also should read and learn new material. Our college provides us with all books and e-books, however we haven’t got any suitable place to read them. Library is too small to make there a reading room and you will never find a silent place in corridors or even in the canteen. For my point of view, there problems affected all students from our group and not only them. That’s why it would be great if you fixed these misapprehension. I am requesting to provide more computers and graphics pads and make a cosy place for reading, as a future designer I can help you to equip it. Hoping for your reasonable consideration. Yours faithfully, Daria.

Dear Sir,

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 of your design faculty, my name is Daria. I am writing this letter to complain about insufficient facilities, supported to our college.

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cosy
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help
 you to equip it.

Hoping for your reasonable consideration.

Yours faithfully
,

Daria. 