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Informal letter about impressions after visiting an exhiition

Informal letter about impressions after visiting an exhiition L3eAn
Dear Louise, Thank you for your last letter! I was really glad to get it. How are things with you? Are you having a good vacation? Sorry, I haven’t been in touch for so long, but I was really busy with my work responsibilities. Right now, I’m writing to you after attending an amazing exhibition. I’ve had marvelous time there! I tell you what, it was highly important for me to see six photographers’ masterpieces. They expressed their own interpretation of the title Here Today. I was full of the joys of spring, when I saw Sandy Adamson’s photos on the grounds of she has a variety of black-and-white photographs of patterns of light that somehow gave me a feeling of time rushing by. Speaking personally, some photos were rather provoking and controversial. It goes without saying, that the photographs at that exhibition were real work of art! Furthermore, I was thrilled to bits to see landscape photos in Australia taken from the air, such as the Great Barrier Reef. So, frankly speaking, this representation made my day and I’m safe to say, that it’s worth seeing! Take a look at my pics on Instagram. It’ll give you an idea of how nice it is. Really wish you were here too. You’d love it! Maybe next month we could come here together – what do you think? Sorry, I have to go now. It’s time for my favourite TV show. Drop me a letter when you can. Lots of love to you and your family! See you soon, Karen.
Dear Louise,

Thank you for your last letter! I was
really
glad to
get
it. How are things with you? Are you having a
good
vacation? Sorry, I haven’t been in touch for
so
long,
but
I was
really
busy with my work responsibilities. Right
now
, I’m writing to you after attending an amazing exhibition. I’ve had marvelous time there!

I
tell
you what, it was
highly
important
for me to
see
six photographers’ masterpieces. They expressed their
own
interpretation of the title Here
Today
. I was full of the joys of spring, when I
saw
Sandy Adamson’s photos on the grounds of she has a variety of black-and-white photographs of patterns of light that somehow gave me a feeling of time rushing by. Speaking
personally
,
some
photos were
rather
provoking and controversial. It goes without saying, that the photographs at that exhibition were real work of art!
Furthermore
, I
was thrilled
to bits to
see
landscape photos in Australia taken from the air, such as the Great Barrier Reef.

So
,
frankly
speaking, this representation made my day and I’m safe to say, that it’s worth seeing!

Take a look at my pics on Instagram. It’ll give you an
idea
of how nice it is.
Really
wish you were here too. You’d
love
it! Maybe
next
month we could
come
here together
what do you
think
? Sorry, I
have to
go
now
. It’s time for my
favourite
TV
show
. Drop me a letter when you can. Lots of
love
to you and your family!

See
you
soon
,

Karen.
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IELTS letter Informal letter about impressions after visiting an exhiition

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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