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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding issues in our house that need to be resolved. Starting our first date of rent we have experienced many problems. The shower in the bathroom is constantly leaking. Unfortunately, it is hard to sleep at night and impossible to have a bath. Another concern that I would like to bring to your attention is the broken fence. We live on the busy street, people pass our building on a regular basis. I would like to feel safe at my own house, especially considering that we have paid the full rent and deposit on time. As per our agreement, four tenants suppose to occupy the entire house and currently there are only three of us. As I am a full-time student it is extremely hard to afford the rent. If you can not fulfil this request, at least allow us to post an advertisement online and find a roommate. Please, help us to schedule a maintenance person to come. As well as your decision or progress on searching a new tenant. Sincerely, Jane Atkinson
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you regarding issues in our
house
that need to
be resolved
.

Starting our
first
date of rent we have experienced
many
problems. The shower in the bathroom is
constantly
leaking. Unfortunately, it is
hard
to sleep at night and impossible to have a bath. Another concern that I would like to bring to your attention is the broken fence. We
live
on the busy street,
people
pass our building on a regular basis. I would like to feel safe at my
own
house
,
especially
considering that we have paid the full rent and deposit on time.

As per our agreement, four tenants suppose to occupy the entire
house
and
currently
there are
only
three of us.
As
I am a full-time student it is
extremely
hard
to afford the rent. If you can not fulfil this request, at least
allow
us to post an advertisement online and find a roommate.

Please
,
help
us to schedule a maintenance person to
come
.
As well
as your decision or progress on searching a new tenant.

Sincerely
,

Jane Atkinson
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IELTS letter write a letter to your landlord and describe issues in house

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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