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Write a letter to the hotel manager to cancel or postpone the booking has been done from you.

Write a letter to the hotel manager to cancel or postpone the booking has been done from you. N5nb

Dear Sir/Ma'am, I am writing in connection to postpone the reservation at your hotel with the name of Mr Kapoor for 3 nights from 22nd July to 25th July due to our clients have changed the plan for conference meeting. Although, I have received a mail from our client in the morning in that they requested to delay the meeting which was going to be placed at your place and they supposed to stay there for 3 days. Therefore, it is a humble request from our organization to cancel the booking or if it possible to postpone the charges I have paid to you account in address of booking as in future I need make a reservation again for the same clients. The payment could be covered at that time. I hope you would address my concern and give me a sigh of relief by posting it to other days. I would be grateful to hear productive response in the near future. Yours sincerely,

Dear Sir/Ma'am,

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 the plan for conference meeting.

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 possible to postpone the charges I have paid to you account in address of booking as in future I need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a reservation again for the same clients. The payment could be covered
 at that time.

I hope you would address my concern and give me a sigh of relief by posting it to other days. I would be grateful to hear productive response in the near future.

Yours sincerely
, 

IELTS letter Write a letter to the hotel manager to cancel or postpone the booking has been done from you.

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

164 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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