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You live at university accommodation. You found that some valuables were stolen from your room. Write a letter to accommodation manager about this theft. In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe what happened • Write what you want from the accommodation manager

You live at university accommodation. You found that some valuables were stolen from your room. Write a letter to accommodation manager about this theft. In your letter • Introduce yourself • Describe what happened • Write what you want from the accommodation manager Dlw3A

Dear Mr. Smith, I am an international student of business administration final year at your prestigious university and presently accommodating at a hall of residence on campus. This epistle is being written report the robbery which took place yesterday night around 11’o clock. Last night, me and my roommate, Andrew Lee, were doing rehearsals for the youth festival which is going to held on 7th march, 2020. When we came back around 12P. M, we sensed something fishy. To our utter shock, we realized that some expensive items are not there in the locker and it was broken. The stolen items include golden jewellery that I was supposed to wear on upcoming feasts, $10000 cash and one laptop of apple brand. We have put forward this theft to the housekeeping department, but they act as ignorant in our case. I solicit you to please look into this matter at the earliest. I would appreciate if you could provide assistance in locating our belongings. I think looking into the CCTV footage could give us the evidence of the person who stole these things. I expect you will help me to get my things back as soon as possible and thank you in advance for considering my matter. Yours sincerely, Peter Lee

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am an international student of business administration final year at your prestigious university and presently
 accommodating at a hall of residence on campus. This epistle is being written
 report the robbery which took place This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, "last night" is used.last night
yesterday night
 around 11’o clock.

Last night, me and my roommate, Andrew Lee, were doing rehearsals for the youth festival which is going to 'Going to' requires the base form: "hold"hold
held
 on 7th When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "march 2020".march 2020
march, 2020
. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 we came back around 12P. M, we sensed something fishy. To our utter shock, we realized that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 expensive items are not there in the locker and it was broken
. The stolen items include golden Possible spelling mistake. 'jewellery' is British English.jewelry
jewellery
 that I was supposed
 to wear on upcoming feasts, $10000 cash and one laptop of apple brand. We have put forward this theft to the housekeeping department, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they act as ignorant in our case.

I solicit you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 look into this matter at the earliest. I would appreciate if you could provide assistance in locating our belongings. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 looking into the CCTV footage could give us the evidence of the person who stole these things.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 my things back as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible and thank you in advance for considering my matter.

Yours sincerely
,

Peter Lee