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You lent your friend an item of clothing a few months ago. But they haven’t given it back yet. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your friend a piece of news. Describe the item of clothing your friend borrowed. Ask them to give it back to you.

You lent your friend an item of clothing a few months ago. But they haven’t given it back yet. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your friend a piece of news. Describe the item of clothing your friend borrowed. Ask them to give it back to you. ndO8n
Dear Nam How are you? I’m writing to you about my new suit which I lent you three months ago. I will engage in an event after 10 days and I need it to go to this event confidently. My college class is going to hold a yearbook for the final year at university. We’ll take our picture in those places, such as my university yard, Temple of Literature, etc. After going to the last destination in Gamuda City, we’ll hold a mini party to celebrate both these events and four year at college. Amazingly, we’ll enjoy a delicious meal; including a huge cake, some fruit, and a bottle of Cocacola. As you know, my suit was an important gift that my mother gave me when I had a scholarship. It consists of three things: a blazer, casual pants and a pair of loafers. First, My blazer was black, it had not only two pockets on either side of it, but you also wore a shirt. Second, my casual pants were branded as Biluxury and it’d a plaited pattern. Third, my pair of loafers was brown with the size of 43, and it was bought at the shop near my house. Unfortunately, after I’d spent a lot of money to get an English Course, I didn’t have enough money for my personal issue, especially rent a suit to go to this event. I hope that you’ll give it back to me when you receive my letter. Thanks so much. Write back when you can
Dear Nam

How are you? I’m writing to you about my new suit which I lent you three months ago. I will engage in an
event
after 10 days and I need it to go to this
event
confidently
.

My college
class
is going to hold a yearbook for the final year at university. We’ll take our picture in those places, such as my university yard, Temple of Literature, etc. After going to the last destination in
Gamuda
City, we’ll hold a mini party to celebrate both these
events
and four year at college.
Amazingly
, we’ll enjoy a delicious meal; including a huge cake,
some
fruit, and a bottle of
Cocacola
.

As you know, my suit was an
important
gift that my mother gave me when I had a scholarship. It consists of three things: a blazer, casual pants and a pair of loafers.
First
, My blazer was black, it had not
only
two pockets on either side of it,
but
you
also
wore a shirt. Second, my casual pants
were branded
as
Biluxury
and it’d a plaited pattern. Third, my pair of loafers was brown with the size of 43, and it was
bought
at the shop near my
house
.

Unfortunately, after I’d spent
a lot of
money to
get
an English Course, I didn’t have
enough
money for my personal issue,
especially
rent a suit to go to this
event
. I hope that you’ll give it back to me when you receive my letter.

Thanks
so
much. Write back when you
can
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IELTS letter You lent your friend an item of clothing a few months ago. But they haven’t given it back yet. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Give your friend a piece of news. Describe the item of clothing your friend borrowed. Ask them to give it back to you.

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253 words
6.0
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